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Protected edit request on 13 March 2024[edit]
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Under the section "Possible Side Effects", there is a comma splice in the sentence about cotton. After the first clause, there should be an em dash, not a comma.
Incorrect: “[…] depths of your soul, very painful, but […]”
Corrected: “[…] depths of your soul — very painful, but […]”
2605:59C8:115D:6414:6A5C:9D58:90C9:6B64 20:16, 13 March 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks. I changed that and much more (some of the obscenities and some of the racism). The article has been protected against edits by non-Uncyclopedians since 2010. It still reads like a HowTo: rather than an encyclopedia article, and like babble rather than humor that has some basis. If you picked a user name, you would immediately be able to remedy this. Spıke 🎙️20:58 13-Mar-24