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From Pee Review[edit]
I haven't made many articles (only two to be specific), but myself and my friends agree that I am a pretty talented writer, so this was my first foray into making a full-length article. I would like to see how other people critique it, and if needed I will try to make it better (or make more!).TKF 23:25, 29 March 2007 (UTC)TKF 23:28, 29 March 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 5 | Humour is too random - needs more on topic humour. See HTBFANJS. |
| Concept: | 5 | A bit of a strange concept really. |
| Prose and formatting: | 8 | Pretty well formatted. Red links should be removed. |
| Images: | 8 | Good images. |
| Miscellaneous: | 3 | Just too weird and random for my taste. |
| Final Score: | 29 | |
| Reviewer: |  Sir Cs1987 UOTM. t. c 04:35, 30 March 2007 (UTC)
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