It's my first article! LOLOLOL--Naue2000 12:38, 16 May 2008 (UTC)
Hea dude! I like the start. It needs more meat on the bones though. Can you spice things up a bit? I like the bit about the age thing, but it's a bit too random in places, and well... I hope you decide to work on this some more, I think it can be a great article! MrNFork you! 01:00, May 17
