Talk:David Farragut

May i have feedback on this

ZOMG yes — at Uncyclopedia:Pee Review. Let me know if the process is confusing. If I find the time, I might even review the article myself — although I contributed sufficiently enough that I'm not sure how legit this would be considered. — Lenoxus 21:38, 16 March 2007 (UTC)

From Pee Review

Humour:	9	This actually got the job done....some how.
Concept:	6	Hmmm... a little bit obscure
Prose and formatting:	6	It would be too easy to read if I wasn't so distracted by the pictures.
Images:	10	Somehow, this REALLY worked...but I don't know why. Its like Tomacco.
Miscellaneous:	5	It is pretty shoddily made, you HAVE to admit that.
Final Score:	36	B+...Not Nominee material, but well above average.
Reviewer:	Happy Weasel 17:49, 24 April 2007 (UTC)

I have peed on the first half of work and you should look at this-

Pikachu Shark indie-emo bands ninja hippie Hamster Bay. He sped past the ninjas,hippies emo- Indy bands and sharks with pikachus on there back, all with his 7 foot ship, the S.S. AOL (Life support pods now leak-free!) and his frigate The S.S Jar-Jar binks.

Hmmm...work on this. Maybe try to relate in back to the main content. Emo is a good sub theme. I haven't worked on the second half, but the pictures still tickle me in a way where I question my longing for this Earth. Happy Weasel 04:28, 14 May 2007 (UTC)