Talk:Break dancing
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I wrote the original article a while back before I registered as a user. It has been edited some so I can no longer wholly take credit, but in actuality I would like to take as little credit as possible without it being none. Please tell me how I can make this better! Thank you. --Hawx 03:47, 28 March 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 8 | Pretty funny. |
| Concept: | 9 | Also good. |
| Prose and formatting: | 6 | Red links should be removed. Looks a bit ugly. I'm not sure why, but it just does. |
| Images: | 8 | Good choice of images. |
| Miscellaneous: | 6 | A few more paragraphs would help. |
| Final Score: | 37 | |
| Reviewer: |  Sir Cs1987 UOTM. t. c 04:47, 30 March 2007 (UTC)
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