Talk:Blazed Pascal

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A play on the fact that Pascals first name sounds an awful lot like "blazed".

Humour:	4	The first paragraph was good. It faded in the middle once you got too hooked on the stoner motif. I liked the joke where he was going through complicated maths theories while stoned. Maybe the article should have been more about that joke than saying 'He's a stoner' again and again. Also, try and hold the expletives (especially the fs). It ruined it for me and does not help the article's humour.
Concept:	3	Personally, I believe that there are way to many articles with the stoner theme on Uncyclopedia. But that's just me being a know nothing arsehole.
Prose and formatting:	5	The reason Uncyclopedia was created was to parody Wikipedia in aspects such as it's extreme want for proper spelling, good grammar and big words. This might need to be addressed in yoyr article. I didn't want to change anything, yet I firmly believe that if the article were written with that formal language, it would be better. It is also a little short. Otherwise, good formatting.
Images:	7	Good.
Miscellaneous:	3	I've never really got into the stoner jokes. They're a bit like the 'your momma's real fat' jokes.
Final Score:	22	Apart from the main joke revolving around stoners and the high levels of swearing, this article is enjoyable.
Reviewer:	Ikabu 11:14, 26 April 2007 (UTC)