HowTo talk:Turn Your Computer On
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From Pee Review[edit]
This is my first HowTo article. Whaddya think?--THE 18:58, 25 April 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 7 | It starts pretty nifty, but deteriorates a bit along the way. Try explaining more about why a mac is more feminine, how does one avoid unwanted pregnancy (Firewall) etc. |
| Concept: | 8 | Good concept, execution could be better. |
| Prose and formatting: | 10 | No complaints here. |
| Images: | 0 | Get some! |
| Miscellaneous: | 7 | link to more categories perhaps? Try get some geeky computer humor as well |
| Final Score: | 32 | All in all, a nice piece - but you can get it much better. |
| Reviewer: | ~ 19:53, 25 April 2007 (UTC)
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