HowTo talk:Survive A Nuclear Attack

A couple words of advice:

1. The paragraphs need to be longer. Two sentences is not enough for a full paragraph.
2. Avoid lists. Anyone can come along and add crap to lists, making them worse than they were to begin with. Instead, write paragraphs based on the individual items in the lists. This is called "fleshing out" the article.

-- Simsilikesims(♀GUN) Talk here. 21:45, April 18, 2013 (UTC)