HowTo talk:Stand in front of large threatening objects and/or situations
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From Pee Review[edit]
| Humour: | 7.5 | Pretty funny, didn't make me literally laugh out loud, but close. |
| Concept: | 9.5 | Love the concept, very funny :) |
| Prose and formatting: | 7.5 | I think this is where the humour could be improved. Great concept, decent structure but if the prose was a bit more subtle or clever in places it could greatly enhance the article. |
| Images: | 7 | Images are better than the average MSPaint chop, the blood on the second one could be more realistic :P Ok images. |
| Miscellaneous: | 7 | Could do with a tiny touch up in terms of formatting ie the HowTo template breaks up the paragraphs and images are clumped together, also I noticed a smattering of spelling errors/typos that could do with cleaning up. |
| Final Score: | 38.5 | Overall a decent article :) Could be enhanced somewhat as mentioned above. |
| Reviewer: | ~ Dame Ceridwyn ~ talk DUN VoNSE arc2.0 12:06, 01 June 2007 | |
Disclaimer[edit]
I must inform everyone that I do occashunilly mayke spellig pisstakes (that was a joke), I mostly am paranoid about them and will fix them often, so some may come from subsequent editors of the article. I also am not repsonsible for the GAY Chuck Norris jokes as do not like them and believe they have run stale (hee hee, Chuck Norris sure is strong. hee hee, Chuck Norris sure does have a big penis, hee hee). Jimmy the Hellhound 02:26, 5 July 2007 (UTC)