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Hi. I wrote this a little while ago, and I think the idea is funny, but what I've written doesn't quite carry it off. It has had some additions to it, and I don't think they've really helped. Thank you.
| Humour: | 8 | Really good jokes. I like that a lot. |
| Concept: | 8 | Good idea. I'm really glad you used Wikipedians instead of just the cliché geeks or nerds. Good call. |
| Prose and formatting: | 8 | Good prose -- colloquial style. |
| Images: | 7 | Appropriate images. |
| Miscellaneous: | 8 | I like this piece. I'll have to look back at the history to see the additions. It's one of those articles that has to stay with the concept and the style or it gets screwed up; that can present problems when additional authors start working with it if they don't understand the aims of the piece. |
| Final Score: | 39 | |
| Reviewer: | ----OEJ 02:35, 3 April 2007 (UTC) | |
Anything I can do to improve it? --Don alun 11:58, 3 April 2007 (UTC)