HowTo talk:Crash your dad's new Corvette
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| Humour: | 6 | Umm...wow. The last two sentences remind me of an alternate ending to Ethan Frome. Unnecessary. The rest of it? Very clever, but the sections need to be expanded upon. There's a lot of territoy that you can cover with this article that you haven't, but you can do so easily. |
| Concept: | 9 | I'm sure that this runs through the mind of every teen in such a situation at least once. |
| Prose and formatting: | 7 | The main dividers need more meaty sections, like "About YOur Dad" and "About the Corvette". |
| Images: | 7 | Picture of the totalled Vette? Yes? No? Maybe? |
| Miscellaneous: | 10 | Sure, why not? |
| Final Score: | 39 | It's a good article, essentially. The dark humor works, to a point, just try not to push it too far. Expand on what you have and I think you could have an excellent article on your hands. |
| Reviewer: | Judgement 04:05, 21 February 2007 (UTC) | |
Someone added a crash photo, I'm expanding it, and lost the surreal self-death at the end. --Smrt-guy 19:15, 21 February 2007 (UTC)
Done with the stuffed Corvette!--RnR 09:56, 26 February 2007 (UTC)
Two valves per cylindar!?[edit]
duh it has two valves per cylinder every car does i'm just gonna edit that out myself!
Image[edit]
The corvette is a c5