UnBooks talk:The Gulls

From Pee Review

Any suggestions on how to improve this would be greatly appreciated. I think it's too long, I was trying to make it seem rediculosly pretentious and over the top, but i think i may have taken the disturbing horror elements a bit too far. I'm also looking for some decent images for this, and any way to make the page appear less dull. - Unsigned vote, courtesy of Winstanley1