UnBooks talk:An 82 Year Old Woman Wants My Body!
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This sir... Is good. MrN 
Fork you! 16:43, Oct 5
- Dad, you've made my day. Geoffprickett 16:45, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
- You have made a good article! It obviously needs more pics, a bit of formatting here and there, and some more links to articles. What I normally do it check out UN:BEST to find good articles, and try to think of good places where they could be added into the page. Obviously you need to link this from some other articles as well so that your army of fans are able to find it... If I think of anything to add, I will obviously do so. MrN
Fork you! 16:48, Oct 5
- I think it's struggling a bit for an ending also. The current ending is OK, but I was just a little bit disappointed by it. If you plan on working on anything more (well moh pics!) try to come up with a better ending. Maybe if there was a bit more of a twist which came just at the very end? MrN Fork you! 21:15, Oct 5
- Maybe something more like this? Geoffprickett 21:58, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
- I think it's struggling a bit for an ending also. The current ending is OK, but I was just a little bit disappointed by it. If you plan on working on anything more (well moh pics!) try to come up with a better ending. Maybe if there was a bit more of a twist which came just at the very end? MrN
- You have made a good article! It obviously needs more pics, a bit of formatting here and there, and some more links to articles. What I normally do it check out UN:BEST to find good articles, and try to think of good places where they could be added into the page. Obviously you need to link this from some other articles as well so that your army of fans are able to find it... If I think of anything to add, I will obviously do so. MrN