Talk:Watch Dogs
About this page[edit]
This page is currently a work in progress and help is much appreciated. If you wish to discuss something about this page please contact me at my talk page. NOTE: I would prefer that this article doesn't become a hate article for Watch Dogs.
UPDATE: New edits have arrived. I am also planning to include a plot section soon enough.
--Sendator - In training (talk) 06:27, January 17, 2015 (UTC)
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Because you used personal pronouns, this article sounds like it's a conversation. Cut out useless and unfunny sentences and do not start sentences with conjunctions. (Add more humour too.)
Hugs and Kisses
Adamwashere (talk) 18:59, January 17, 2015 (UTC)Adamwashere
I fixed the Development paragraph to make it sound less conversational.
Lots of Love
Adamwashere (talk) 19:10, January 17, 2015 (UTC)Adamwashere