Talk:Tornadocane

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This is my first article, kind of tried to be what i think is humorous, everyone is different, and i'm a meteorologist, so it was a bit tough, being an actual event... so yeah, looking for tips, hints, whatevah, because i am currently not satisfied with my own work, but need an outsiders opinion... Thanks all... —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 131.46.41.71 (talk • contribs)