Talk:The Crime Gang

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I'm rather pleased with this one (if I say so myself) and I'm posting it here mostly to ask what you think it'd need to make it VFH-worthy.--Wyattj 17:37, 27 December 2006 (UTC)

Instead of having the mugshots in a lump, followed by their text, try putting each pic on the right or left of the appropriate paragraph. It needs one more pic to add colour to the pic-free section at the end. Lose as many of the red links as you can (they don't actually have to link to a page of the same name). Also, I'm not laughing. This is probably not your fault as I'm in a foul mood for reasons which I will not go into here.--Sir Modusoperandi ^Boinc! 08:55, 3 January 2007 (UTC)

Fixed the redlinks and the mugshots. I do agree that the humour here is giggle rather than belly-laugh.--Wyattj 19:12, 9 January 2007 (UTC)

It should probably have an "origin" paragraph (how they met on the playground in grade school or something) before the description of the individuals within the gang.--Sir Modusoperandi ^Boinc! 20:01, 9 January 2007 (UTC)