Talk:Returned and Services League of Australia

I liked this page very much, Peter, and hope to have gone some way to addressing the points raised by the Administrator. Some of it may be lost on non-Aussies, but Mr Ruxton wouldn't have worried about that. Hopefully the page will survive. --Unlaw 00:06, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, Unlaw. I'm unlikely to write some of the "over the top" material that I see on other pages. However, this rang a bell. Please also try (my) "hair of the dog".Peter Brindafella 02:13, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Right, Peter, I've tried a few more things while focussed. I'm asking myself: Would the average RSL member get a laugh out of this? Hence the 'Daily Remembrance' is not to be mocked - though, as you may know, it really is known as the 'witching hour'. I'm not sure that either 'hangover' or 'hair of the dog' works as yet, and I would expect non-Aussies to know about 'hair of the 'favourite rum' line, (a) because it is just an ad and (b) because (I find) it gets into a loop that can be hard to click out of. The 'clandestine' line goes to a sports site, so needs to be corrected or removed. I've shifted the genuine 'External drinks' into 'References'. Now I'll leave this article alone unless specially inspired. (Shit, it's a public holiday and I haven't had a drink yet!) --Unlaw 02:42, April 5, 2010 (UTC)