Talk:David Gilmour
I wish the Pink Floyd page was this good. --Ally525 20:25, 1 Dec 2005 (UTC)
- Wow - you've been tweaking this for months! If I were you, I'd take a deep breath and slam the article on the VFH page - at least I'd died trying. -- Colonel Swordman 14:34, 30 May 2006 (UTC)
I see Adolf Hitler's been at work on this piece, changing, editing and cutting things without asking the people who wrote them. Well done, I'll do the same for you sometime.--MackORell 06:04, 1 June 2006 (UTC)
- If this is your idea of funny, you might want to sign up for an account with Encyclopedia Dramatica. ~ T. (talk) 10:14, 1 June 2006 (UTC)
From Pee Review[edit]
I've been tweaking this one for a long time, after Codeine put out an S.O.S. to repair the original entry. Any feedback is appreciated. ~ T. (talk) 20:02, 11 May 2006 (UTC)
I've just voted for another of your articles, so I know I'm not addressing some n00b -- but this one fails at the Random Not Funny test. I can see where it's going, Syd and Roger, Roger leaves Syd for Dave, ho ho, but all the random stuff in between weeds out any sense of theme it might otherwise develop. What it needs is to look more like a Wiki article, but deviate somewhere and ruthlessly pursue a single theme. (in my opinion, needless to add). What about different phases of Dave's life being allied to different Floyd albums? I can see the start of it, but I have every FLoyd album on my shelf and I'm not chuckling. FreeMorpheme 22:43, 30 May 2006 (UTC)
Freaking Hilarious![edit]
Good job!--Mannsvilla 22:16, 29 May 2007 (UTC)