Forum:New York City -- Massive Rewrites

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Okay, so for the past two weeks, I've been pounding away at the disgrace that was New York City. Granted, this has involved some serious redactions -- mostly redactions of random stupidity.

I had every intention of retaining the actual humor of what I deleted, and was simply reorganizing the article to make more sense.

If someone could look at the most recent version of the article I posted, then look at what some fine upstanding old-boy reverted it to, and enlighten me. I want to keep working on this, but don't want to violate any more rules that will get my work trashed. --Zinfandel 21:10, 16 January 2008 (UTC)

I'm sorry if I mistakenly reverted the edits, but I got "Large removal" warnings from a live Recent Changes feed. Unfortunately, I decided to simply revert before checking to see if the edits were actually good. I have restored the edits back to your last revision, and I apologize for this mistake. --Sir Starnestommy (Talk • Contribs • CUN) 21:23, Jan. 16, 2008

No problem. I'm still learning the ropes here, and don't want to step on the wrong toes. Sorry if I seem thin-skinned. I am, it's a medical condition. --Zinfandel 21:32, 16 January 2008 (UTC)

We all are, trust me. Especially early. Feel free to post more in the Forums. We'll listen. (Though you got lucky you weren't mocked on your first go. That's what usually happens. Initiation and all.)--<<>> 13:27, 17 January 2008 (UTC)

Actually, we'd planned to, but Hinoa left the fridge door open and all our mockery spoiled. Sir Modusoperandi ^Boinc! 16:54, 17 January 2008 (UTC)

Yup, bloody Hinoa edit conflicted me and ruined my mock. That was my last mock, too. Now I have to go make more. Unsolicited conversation Extravagant beauty PEEING 23:43, 17 January 2008 (UTC)