Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Alberto Gonzalez Runs for President
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User:Narf, the Wonder Puppy/Alberto Gonzalez Runs for President[edit]
I'm not done, but all I have to add is Straight Man parts and an image. --Narf, the Wonder Puppy/I support Global Warming and I'm 100% proud of it! 05:48, 16 September 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 3 | I like the original better. This isn't really funny, simply focusing on the fact he's hispanic. |
| Concept: | 3 | Having an hispanic run for president isn't a good concept. Bill Richardson, hispanic, is running for President at the same time. I'd stick with the original concept but still, I'd rewrite. |
| Prose and formatting: | 5 | I'm no grammar teacher, so you might want to put {{Proofread}} at the bottom of the article. This needs formatting help, as I said before, take a look at The UnNews articles in this category and see how they write |
| Images: | 0 | Sorry pal, you need images. The image I suggested last time probably should be placed on this article, or make a request at UN:PIC |
| Miscellaneous: | 4 | This is not written in a proffesional manner, you really should read HowTo:Tune up an UnNews article |
| Final Score: | 15 | This really has potential, this could be great if you write in a proffesional mannre and take a look at the link above, good luck. |
| Reviewer: | --Sir Manforman  13:37, 16 September 2007 (UTC)
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