Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/A List of Things To Do Before I Die
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A List of Things To Do Before I Die[edit]
Lakepoint 19:24, August 5, 2010 (UTC)
I'm doing this. Give me 24 hours. --Some Idiot 05:26, August 6, 2010 (UTC)
Humour: | 8 | Many points in this article are actually pretty funny, and many made me chuckle. The main problem about this article, however, is do with the Concept section and so I'll detail everything there. |
Concept: | 5 | This is a good concept but there are a few problems here.
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Prose and formatting: | 4 | A few problems. First of all, it doesn't look as a list, but this will change if you follow my advice in the concept section. The pictures are also badly spaced out, but you be able to spread them out easier when you lengthen your article. One problem that needs immediate fixing, however, is your links. Of the ones that are there, many of them are red links. This looks really bad. So, if a word doesn't have a page about it, don't link it. While we're on the subject of links, I'll add a few tips.
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Images: | 7 | Good pictures but this score could definitely go up once you have expanded your article, as every dot point could have a picture. Remember to space your images evenly, and visit image request for good photoshopped images. There is definitely potential for this score to go up to a nine or ten, you've just got to put some effort into it. |
Miscellaneous: | 6 | Averaged your scores. I also think you could add some quotes, by the ay. A well written quote is always a jewel. |
Final Score: | 30 | So, the main problems are in the concept but with expansion this could article could be heaps better and grow to be a real quality Uncyclopedia page. Good work on your third (is it?) page. Hope to see you writing more, and I also hope that all helped. |
Reviewer: | --Some Idiot 05:57, August 6, 2010 (UTC) |