Cleaned up and resubmitted. Removed most of the {{c}} tags, and added two new images. Megalomaniac Martin “The Unfortunately Unfeatured” Ultima • (VOTE FOR ME!) • talk • (AND MY PICS TOO!) • contribs 17:25, 3 July 2007 (UTC)
Humour:
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6
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Not bad, but not hilarious either. More jokes would help.
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Concept:
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6
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I tend to enjoy company related articles more when they are constructed around a basic, funny, satirical idea. This is lacking in satire.
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Prose and formatting:
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5
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Linking to actual articles in the style you have done can be funny. However, in this they are all redlinks, and that is just ugly.
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Images:
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9
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The images are undoubtedly the best part of this article. Good stuff.
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Miscellaneous:
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7
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Generally just lacking anything special, and there are still a few issues that should be fixed, as I have mentioned above.
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Final Score:
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33
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I doubt that this has a chance on VFH at the moment. You should at least fix the redlinks first.
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Reviewer:
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Sir Cs1987 UOTM. t. c 02:19, 4 July 2007 (UTC)
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